Comments for Transient Creature http://transient.leysaulnier.com An online novel/webserial. Tue, 29 Jun 2010 00:03:34 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 Comment on 005 Dead-ish, Anyway by Shilo http://transient.leysaulnier.com/read-novel/chapter005/comment-page-1/#comment-8 Shilo Tue, 29 Jun 2010 00:03:34 +0000 http://transient.leysaulnier.com/#comment-8 1. Mmmmm, mirror goop. 2. ZOMBIES! ZOMBIES ZOMBIES ZOMBIES! Oh. Oh, I love you, and I love this, and I love zombies and you and this and alksjd 3. "Adair grabbed her hand, squeezing tightly, forcing her attention forward. Forcing her forward, and at a better pace. “Don’t look.”" AND WITH THAT, I SHIP IT, I SHIP IT SO HARD. 4. THIS WORLD IS CRAZY I love it. 1. Mmmmm, mirror goop.

2. ZOMBIES! ZOMBIES ZOMBIES ZOMBIES! Oh. Oh, I love you, and I love this, and I love zombies and you and this and alksjd

3. “Adair grabbed her hand, squeezing tightly, forcing her attention forward. Forcing her forward, and at a better pace. “Don’t look.””

AND WITH THAT, I SHIP IT, I SHIP IT SO HARD.

4. THIS WORLD IS CRAZY I love it.

]]> Comment on 005 Dead-ish, Anyway by Just A Little Dead, Honest. | Transient Creature http://transient.leysaulnier.com/read-novel/chapter005/comment-page-1/#comment-7 Just A Little Dead, Honest. | Transient Creature Sun, 27 Jun 2010 17:06:51 +0000 http://transient.leysaulnier.com/#comment-7 [...] 005 Dead-ish, Anyway [...] [...] 005 Dead-ish, Anyway [...]

]]> Comment on 004 Only Way Out by Shilo http://transient.leysaulnier.com/read-novel/chapter004/comment-page-1/#comment-6 Shilo Sun, 23 May 2010 05:18:08 +0000 http://transient.leysaulnier.com/?page_id=51#comment-6 ALKSJD;SKLJDF WAS NOT EXPECTING AN ENDING LIKE THAT oh goodness oh goodness OH GOODNESS. That was way too cool, I am so excited. You keep me so captivated, Ley, you really do. I'm always hanging on waiting for what's next, and I can't wait to get from one sentence to the next. The scene in the bathroom with Magnus, and then the end with the mirror. Your timing of actions is something I am so envious of. VWORP-VWORP. DON'T THINK I DON'T KNOW WHERE YOU GOT THAT SOUND FROM. The only complaint I have doesn't have anything to do with the story. I love this layout a lot, but reading white text on a black background makes my eyes cross after a few sentences, and I have to actually shake my head to gain focus again. ALKSJD;SKLJDF WAS NOT EXPECTING AN ENDING LIKE THAT oh goodness oh goodness OH GOODNESS. That was way too cool, I am so excited.

You keep me so captivated, Ley, you really do. I’m always hanging on waiting for what’s next, and I can’t wait to get from one sentence to the next. The scene in the bathroom with Magnus, and then the end with the mirror. Your timing of actions is something I am so envious of.

VWORP-VWORP. DON’T THINK I DON’T KNOW WHERE YOU GOT THAT SOUND FROM.

The only complaint I have doesn’t have anything to do with the story. I love this layout a lot, but reading white text on a black background makes my eyes cross after a few sentences, and I have to actually shake my head to gain focus again.

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]]> Comment on 003 Plenty Of Room by Writer’s Block. Honest. | Transient Creature http://transient.leysaulnier.com/read-novel/chapter003/comment-page-1/#comment-4 Writer’s Block. Honest. | Transient Creature Sun, 09 May 2010 04:08:36 +0000 http://transient.leysaulnier.com/?page_id=38#comment-4 [...] 003 Plenty Of Room [...] [...] 003 Plenty Of Room [...]

]]> Comment on 002 Down, Down, Down by I Hate My Mouse. | Transient Creature http://transient.leysaulnier.com/read-novel/chapter002/comment-page-1/#comment-3 I Hate My Mouse. | Transient Creature Sat, 24 Apr 2010 00:50:50 +0000 http://transient.never-after.org/?page_id=19#comment-3 [...] 002 Down, Down, Down [...] [...] 002 Down, Down, Down [...]

]]> Comment on 001 Chasing The Storm by First Update | Transient Creature http://transient.leysaulnier.com/read-novel/chapter001/comment-page-1/#comment-2 First Update | Transient Creature Sat, 17 Apr 2010 01:14:30 +0000 http://transient.never-after.org/?page_id=16#comment-2 [...] 001 Chasing The Storm [...] [...] 001 Chasing The Storm [...]

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